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EDIT: This is the final ad as I am turning it in.



This is a class assignment due tomorrow, so any feedback would be nice.

It's supposed to be a full page magazine ad, probably running in People magazine.

I'm not certain about the motion lines by "On-The-Go," and I think the layout could maybe do with some minor tweaks. Tell me what you think! Quickly!

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Can you put the female on the other side? Flip her and the text? Just to see how that sits?
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Yeah, I like the alignment on the text in this one better. Well done!

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